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Публикувано: съб мар 10, 2007 2:24 pm
от TeRMiNaTe
Това е моето творение на английски език. Просто английския много ме влече :c022: Не е нищо особено, но на мен лично ми харесва.
A walk in the forest
It was a shiny day. Two children didn't have what to do, so they decided to go for a walk. They went to buy some food for the trip and then they went in the nearest forest. The trip was exhausting, so they stopped by one tree. While they were resting, they gathered some beautifull flowers. Then they ate all the food they have to get some energy. And when they decided to go home, they didn't know which way to go. It was getting dark and it looked like it's going to rain. But with no food they were getting hungry and tired. They started to loose hope. It started raining and some of the raindrops managed to reach the children. They were wet and it was cold, so the boy went to get some sticks to make a fire. When he returned he tryed to make fire with the sticks. He realized that it isn't so easy, especially when it's raining. After one hour of trying, he finaly made a spark which started the fire. The girl was so happy, that now she can get warm, that she kissed the boy. They talked about their familyes and friends and how much they miss them. Suddenly the rain stopped. They heard someone comming. It was the father of the girl. He gave them some warm cloathes and led them out of the forest. The children ran to their mothers and they were very happy. They had finaly escaped the forest. After what had happend the boy and the girl became best friends and they were always together.
TeRMiNaTe®

Публикувано: съб мар 10, 2007 7:19 pm
от Matodato
Whit - With
Samo - Some

Иначе за написано... Съвсем обикновенно и неангажиращо, изглежда ми написано повече от скука... Нещо в даскало в час по АЕ :P :)

Публикувано: съб мар 10, 2007 7:24 pm
от Jubei
Заради английския език ли си го написал, или за да ни представиш нещо ?
Защото ако е само заради езика би било жалко ... :a075:

Публикувано: съб мар 10, 2007 7:34 pm
от is_the_BEST
Може да го е написал, заради хората, които играят булфлеет и не са българи !

Публикувано: съб мар 10, 2007 7:36 pm
от RoYaL
BEST написа:Цитат(BEST @ Mar 10 2007, 10:34 PM)
Може да го е написал, заради хората, които играят булфлеет и не са българи !
Само заради това ще е :lol:

Публикувано: съб мар 10, 2007 7:53 pm
от TeRMiNaTe
Извинявам се за правописните грешки, ама вече 8 месеца не съм се докосвал до езика :p015: Matodato стани врачка :P наистина го написах в час по немски език ;) Jubei написах го от скука и за да си припомня любимия ми език, а след това се сетих, че може да го постна тук, но не го направих на момента, защото знам, че ще има много критики. Може би творението ми отчасти е и мотивация за чужденците да пишат в тази част от форума :a055:
ПП: Поправих правописните грешки.

Публикувано: съб мар 10, 2007 7:58 pm
от SoulRipper
Not bad, old bulfleet friend of mine. :)

P.S. You'll never guess who I am! :)

Публикувано: съб мар 10, 2007 8:00 pm
от TeRMiNaTe
Nice to see you interested in my work. :a055: