Non-Bulgarian texts editing

[GuessWH0]

Please, if you found something in the game translations that you do not accept as sounding right, here is the place to give your suggestions.

[TreX]

QUOTE(GuessWH0 @ Aug 4 2007, 05:36 PM) Please, if you found something in the game translations that you do not accept as sounding right, here is the place to give your suggestions.

wow thx!

Ill get on this :D

[TreX]

Mission Names & Descriptions


Original Text


"Transport"



Descriptions: N/A



Proposed Name for Mission


"Cargo Run"

(hits 2 birds with one stone there )

Mission Description

"Long Though out time beings have loaded cargo's of precious resources,
be it from the ore rich mines of your mining outposts or the Pillaged worlds of your foes" -TreX 2007AD

Type of ship needed for mission

Cargoship
Mega cargoship

You can use your Cargoships in three ways
Transporting Resources between your planetsAttacking over players planets to "Hijack" other players resourcesProtecting your own resources when under attack



Original Text

Espionage


Descriptions: N/A


Proposed Name for Mission


"Spying"

Mission Description

"All warfare is based on deception. There is no place where espionage is not used. Offer the enemy bait to lure him." -Sun-tzu 300bc

Ship Needed for mission


Spy Probe






More coming soon!

[Nixie]

I dont know if this is the right place to put this but it is wrongly put xD

The World Council gives yout the opportunity to be part of the decision taking process of the game. You will receive 1 additional council for every week you play Bulfleet.


yout, should be you,

just a lil typo but just thought to tell you's.

[DSP]

The Description of Energy Systems in English is wrong. Bulgarian Description contains more information. Please add all information to the english description.

[Ulf]

On the "Overview" Page, in the "Information about your fleets" section the messages could be reworded to save space.

The messages that start out with... "A fleet of yours sent to" could be worded "Your fleet to".
And messages that start out with... "One of your fleets sent from"could be worded "Your fleet from".
And the Fleet's Mission only needs to be listed once for each fleet.
The first change would save 3 spaces and 8 letters. The second change would save 3 spaces and 10 letters.
These changes cutting out the Extra Line for the Mission would make the messages fit smaller screens better.

I know it's not a huge difference, but it would tighten those messages up a bit, so the messages could take up fewer lines.
Which would help, especially when there are 15 fleets coming and going. a086.gif

Messages that look like this
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04:49:41 One of your fleets sent from 4:299:1, arrives at 4:274:7.
..............Fleet's mission is: Attack.
05:49:50 A fleet of yours sent to 4:274:7, is on its way home
..............4:299:1. Fleet`s mission was: Attack.
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Could look like this.

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04:49:41 Your fleet from 4:299:1, arrives at 4:274:7.
05:49:50 Your fleet to 4:274:7, arrives home 4:299:1.
..............Fleet`s mission: Attack.
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------

[Arcko]

Government page:

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Inflation is caused by continuously storage of much resource on your planet.

Could look like:

Inflation is caused by continously storing too much resources on your planet.

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Buy 8 hours production of your mines.

Could be:

Buy 8 hours of production from your mines.

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Typo:

You can only buy resourses once within 48 hours.

Resourses is spelled resources.

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You can only buy resourses once within 48 hours. You will receive 8 hours production extra. This restriction prevents gameplay balance disturbances.

Could be:

You can only buy resources once every 48 hours. You will recieve 8 hours of production extra. This restriction prevents gameplay imbalances.

[Arcko]

Activity Check:

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Typo:

With this activity check you confirm that you are in front of your PC. It is neccessary because it is possiblento simulate activity with browser's refresh functions or stand-alone programs.

"possiblento" should be possible to.